1.5 STARS
“Her feminine scent wafted up to him – pink, he thought, sweet like
vanilla and rose.”
The Pink Rose started out with potential, but
slowly spiraled down into a mess of grammar errors and contradictions. After moving smoothly the book began to jump
back and forth between Max and Amy, which made it confusing. The author notes
Max using protection the first time they were intimate, then not using any
during the shower session, then jumps to his parent’s family dinner where they
talked to him, and his siblings, about wanting grandchildren. But nothing came
of it…
The booked
seemed to jump all over the place with an insignificant amount of character
detail and depth to the story.
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